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Your buzzzing thing just don't work. Why not post it in the normal manner?

Click on this link, Domenic, and then click on the page to zoom in and out:

http://www.freado.com/player/bookplayer.php?contentid=3678&authorid=2802&preview=1

Good Morning Shelagh,

Thank you for responding tyo Domenic's query.

As you know, I'm "computer illiterate", so if you can advise me the "normal" way to post the Chapter One here, I'll be quick to correct it.

Thanks again,

Michael Phelps

Hi Michael,

Just copy and paste from a Word file.

Mitch, I got into your buzz thing.
I read the first eight pages. I would say no...your book is not ready yet. The details are all there, but, it reads more like a police report than a story. You are telling the story, rather than showing.

Domenic