Michael Phelps

Number of posts: 8 Registration date: 2009-07-08 Age: 66 Location: Miami, Florida & New York, NY, U.S. of A.
 | Subject: THE EXECUTION OF JUSTICE - CHAPTER ONE Wed Dec 16, 2009 4:22 pm | |
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domenic Pappalardo Four Star Member


Number of posts: 840 Registration date: 2009-04-27
 | Subject: Re: THE EXECUTION OF JUSTICE - CHAPTER ONE Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:28 pm | |
| Your buzzzing thing just don't work. Why not post it in the normal manner? |
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Shelagh Admin


Number of posts: 7227 Registration date: 2008-01-11 Location: UK
 | Subject: Re: THE EXECUTION OF JUSTICE - CHAPTER ONE Thu Dec 17, 2009 4:33 pm | |
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Michael Phelps

Number of posts: 8 Registration date: 2009-07-08 Age: 66 Location: Miami, Florida & New York, NY, U.S. of A.
 | Subject: Re: THE EXECUTION OF JUSTICE - CHAPTER ONE Thu Dec 17, 2009 5:56 pm | |
| Good Morning Shelagh,
Thank you for responding tyo Domenic's query.
As you know, I'm "computer illiterate", so if you can advise me the "normal" way to post the Chapter One here, I'll be quick to correct it.
Thanks again,
Michael Phelps |
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Shelagh Admin


Number of posts: 7227 Registration date: 2008-01-11 Location: UK
 | Subject: Re: THE EXECUTION OF JUSTICE - CHAPTER ONE Thu Dec 17, 2009 9:40 pm | |
| Hi Michael,
Just copy and paste from a Word file. |
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domenic Pappalardo Four Star Member


Number of posts: 840 Registration date: 2009-04-27
 | Subject: Re: THE EXECUTION OF JUSTICE - CHAPTER ONE Sat Dec 26, 2009 4:29 pm | |
| Mitch, I got into your buzz thing. I read the first eight pages. I would say no...your book is not ready yet. The details are all there, but, it reads more like a police report than a story. You are telling the story, rather than showing. Domenic |
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