I just found one of the best articles on scene building I have ever
read and just had to share it. It is from the March/April issue of
Writer's Digest.
5 Easy Tips to Strengthen Your ScenesI have been told that I'm pretty good with dialogue, but I tend to rush
scenes that should be drawn out and overwrite unimportant scenes that
probably shoud be cut out. I also don't paint a picture of my
characters very well. I put too much trust in the reader to do that.
This article has already helped me see my shortcomings.
The title of the 5 tips are:
1. RELIVE YOUR SCENES - Not rewrite. Revise
2. HEAT UP THE CORE
3. ADJUST YOUR PACE
4. STRETCH THE TENSION
5. CUT OR STRENGTHEN WEAK SCENES
All have more information and examples